There is a new store in town. Aha! They sell cookies. But wait just a minute. Yikes Cookies with bugs in them! If I eat it, I might turn into a monster with red spots. Then, The police would throw me in jail. Wait a minute! Something smells good. I follow the smell outside. There, Mom is holding a bagful of cookies. I also take a cookie and put it in my mouth. Wow, I’ve never had anything so yummy before!

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There is a new store in town.

This sentence is correct.

Aha! They sell cookies.

This sentence is correct.

But wait just a minute.

This sentence is correct.

Yikes Cookies with bugs in them!

This sentence is correct.

If I eat it, I might turn into a monster with red spots.

This sentence is correct.

Then, The police would throw me in jail.

This sentence is correct.

Wait a minute! Something smells good.

This sentence is correct.

I follow the smell outside.

This sentence is correct.

There, Mom is holding a bagful of cookies.

This sentence is correct.

I also take a cookie and put it in my mouth.

This sentence is correct.

Wow, I’ve never had anything so yummy before!

This sentence is correct.