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I woke up at 7:45 am.
And I get ready for school. 
I set up for school at 8:30am.
I go early for reading.
Class starts at 9 am. I do my class and my class ends at 1:40 am.

After my classes I go to piano academy. My piano academy do 1hour, so it ends at 2:40.

After piano I go to art academy. My art academy starts at 3:30 and ends at 5pm. So how much hour do my art academy do? 

After art class I eat dinner with my family then I brush my teeth, if I have to I took a bath. Then I get ready for sleep.

Correction:  Student's sentence   Corrected sentence        Grammar explanation       Better 


I woke up at 7:45 am.
I woke up at 7:45 AM.
In formal writing, 'AM' (Ante Meridiem) is typically capitalized to distinguish it as abbreviations for 'before noon'. This follows the standard rules for capitalizing abbreviations. 

And I get ready for school.

This sentence is correct.


I set up for school at 8:30am.

This sentence is grammatically correct.


I go early for reading.

This sentence is correct.


Class starts at 9 am.

This sentence is correct.


I do my class and my class ends at 1:40 am.

I attend my class, and it ends at 1:40 AM.

The independent clause 'I attend my class ' is a more commonly used and natural phrase to describe the action of participation.


After my classes I go to piano academy.
After my classes, I go to the piano academy.
The comma is needed in this sentence because it separates the introductory phrase 'After my classes' from the main clause 'I go to the piano academy'. It also  helps to clarify the structure of the sentence and improve readability.


My piano academy do 1hour, so it ends at 2:40.
My piano academy session lasts for one hour, so it ends at 2:40.
By adding 'session', it specifies that it's the duration of the class that lasts for one hour, not the entire piano academy.


After piano, I go to art academy. 

This sentence is grammatically correct.

My art academy starts at 3:30 and ends at 5pm.

This sentence is correct.


So how much hour do my art academy do?

How many hours does my art academy session last?

The correct phrase we need to use is ‘how many hours’ that means to inquire about the duration of an activity or session. In addition, using the auxiliary verb ‘does’ is the right form for the subject ‘art academy session’ and  indicates the present tense. And lastly, we added the verb ‘last’ to specify the duration of the class.


After art class I eat dinner with my family then I brush my teeth, if I have to I took a bath.
After art class, I eat dinner with my family, then I brush my teeth, and if necessary, I take a bath.
The phrase 'if necessary' introduces a conditional statement, indicating the action that follows if it's needed.


Then I get ready for sleep.

This sentence is correct.






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